Peer Feedback: Evaluation Posts

From the peer feedback regarding my draft of the evaluation posts, although I make clear links with real media products, I understand that I need to make my posts more supervisual, as well as including more detail into my music video - referring to the conventions of it, and then comparing it to my advertisement and digipak. Also, from the peer feedback, they have advised that I refer back to theories learnt during the research stages, and also go into further detail about specific technologies.