Peer Assessment: Music Video

Above is the assessment sheet completed by one of my peers based on my music video. 

The www's include:

• The editing of the shots works well with the music.
• The setting of the music video is individual.
• The use of graphic-matches.

The ebi's include:

• Include a change in location.
• Include more interesting close-up shots.
• More of an enthusiastic performance from the actors.
• To sharpen the editing.

From this peer assessment, my group have achieved a B grade. To improve this, we need to include our concept in the music video - which will be set in a different location, therefore corresponding to one of our ebi's. As well as this, during re-shoots we can film more interesting and exciting shots, therefore ensuring that both the performance and shot types are improved. 

First Draft of Music Video

Here is the first draft of our music video. It is not finished however, as we have yet to include our concept in the video, as well as another location for the performance shots.